walt:use Narrative writing
Yesterday afternoon this happened
“Ready for take off Robin,’’ said Mission control.
“Of course I am.”
They don’t call me dear devil for nothing.
3,2,1, Blast off!!! I was getting higher and higher and higher into the atmosphere. Until it was time to jump. “Mission control here ready to jump?,” and so I replied “I was born to jump.”
“Wish me luck boys,”
3,2,1 Jump!!!
“Oh no my signal, mission control come in mission control,
come in.”
How do I know how to land? I think I’ll just guess. “Robin? Robin?”
What?. “It’s mission control when you land, land on your feet not on your head”
“Roger that sir”
“There will be five hundred mattress,”
“Then I landed safely on the mattress. Everyone was clapping for me,”
The theme of the story is always be brave and give new things a try.
1 comments:
Well done Robin, your story is pretty good.I like the part when you said land on you feet not on your head. Would you want to do the biggest jump in the world?
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