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Friday, 28 August 2015

The Black Piranha

Walt: Write a descriptive paragraph


                                       The Black Piranha
Swimming in the water are a bunch of little kids, they age for 7 to 14 and swim there everyday. Splashing and skimming the top of the water, as well as stomping their feet making the water dirty. To them their just having fun but little do they know they had awaken the monster of the river, The Black Piranha.  


The Black Piranha is a fearsome hunter is the jungle waters. It’s very descriptive because it’s so dark with it’s burning red eyes and a bulldog like body. it’s not very long so it’s more maneuverable in the water making it incredibly fast. These beasts are very cannibalistic but don't hunt in packs like some other fish. They have some incredible  teeth and it’s teeth are some of the sharpest teeth on earth.  


The Black Piranha spies on it’s prey from afar not letting them know it’s there. The Black Piranha moves up closer and closer without the kids knowing, but then he strikes out. Munching down on one of the girls leg ripping a chunk out of her leg, Dragging the little girl into the deeps. All the kids charged out of the water and ran home to get their parents but when they came back there was nothing, no trace of their friend.


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